2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；文中如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文中衔接词丰富。

With the development of technology, majority people are addicted to dependent on computers. This is real reflect the phenomenon The real danger is not that the computer will begin to think like man, but that man will begin to think like the computer. Nonetheless we ought to get rid of using computer without meditation. There is no doubt that human creativity is ruined by computer. First and most, inventive people created computers to bring out a technology revolution,which makes life easier. Yet, computer is double edged. ordinary people overuse computer leading to disability to distinguish right and wrong. besides, many grade school student rely on computer to calculate formulas, which we can foresee the depression. In short,we should be independent and shoulder the responsibility of ability to think. And computer can be used properly.