2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；作者在句法层面做的很棒；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

As we all know,with the development of technology and science,computers gradually take the place of men,because computers have more functions and uses. What our men can do,computers can also do. There are many comparisons about men and computers.For example,firstly,men can sing songs,computers can,too.Next,As us students,we study in traditional classrooms,but we can also learn something through computers,from which we may gain more knowledge in order to broaden our horizons.Most importantly, computers can replace men to make the purchase of goods without going outside whereas men need to go shopping on the streets by themselves. Taking all-above things into consideration,we can easily realize that computers play a vital role in our life,which bring us more convenience and happiness.In addition,We can chat with our good friends online without leaving home to meet them face to face, which help us save our precious time and supply us with more happiness.From that,in conclusion,I see,computers are our country's great progress.