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If a friend of mine is coming to visit China, the most interesting place I prefer to take him to visit is Zhanjiang, my beautiful hometown. To start with, located in the southernmost part of China, Zhanjiang, which is also called Kwangchowan, is known as a coastal city with a long history and rich folk culture and folk art. It's universally acknowledged that the culture of Leizhou is one of the fourth culture of Guangdong province, among which Leizhou dialect and lion dance take the most important role. Besides, there are many interesting places worth a visiting, including Huguangyan, sea view corridor, Donghai island, Techeng island and so on. As is called as the Museum of natural history, Huguangyan is famous for its special geology with the highest value in the research of Maar Lake. Last but not least, the colorful city has a variety of special and delicious food, such as plain boiled chicken and grilled oysters. Apart from these, sea food is also regarded as the special food there owing to its location. In Zhanjiang, my foreigner friend can not only enjoy the distinctive culture and spots, but also taste the local flavor. With all of there above, I think my friend will have an extremely joyful time here.
