文中词汇表达灵活多样,可是单词拼写错误较多;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。
As we konw, Internet bring us lots of convenient, such as receive and send kinds of information. But, few people know that Internet alse has many effects on human communication, both positive and negative impact. Internet, nowadays, express its stronger competition. For instance, it is convenient to talking with friends or parents who at another city or country, shopping abroad, etc., All its function accorate the deveolpment of ecomany. But, its impacts on human's communication are diversity. At the positive part, people takling on the internet are effective and conventent, which save time obviously. Therefoer, on the negative aspect, talking in the internet may gap the relationship between people alse. For people talking through keyboard and sitting front the computer or use cellphone but not speaking, not face to face. Friends cannot see your eyes, hear your voice. So, using Internet must in a moderation degree. In my opinion, if we have something important to talk, we had better take a call.
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