托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第50篇:是否该活到老学到老

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者句法知识较为扎实，可增加复合句和从句使用；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇。

when talking about study, I think the saying that one should not give up on getting a degree just because she is a little older is not accurate. Getting a degree is just a symble that you've finished specific education. The more important thing is the knowledge you've learnt in the education. So it doesn't matter whether you get a degree or not, it matters that whether you get anything from your study during this period. It was once reported that a 75-year-old man took the national entrance examination to get further education and make his life richer. Also, being admitted into a college or university is a chance to know more things you seldom have chance to know from your daily life.