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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4567
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
评语:

简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;高级词汇稍微偏少,单词拼写方面也要继续努力;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

As we know, Internet bring us lots of convenient, such as receive and send kinds of information. But, few people know that Internet also has many effects on human communication, both positive and negative impact. Internet, nowadays, express its stronger competitiveness. For instance, it is convenient to talking with friends or parents who at another city or country, shopping abroad, etc., All its function accorate the deveolpment of ecomany. But, its impacts on human's communication are diversity. At the positive part, person takling on the internet which save time obivously, are effective and conventent. Therefore, on the negative aspect, talking in the internet may gap the relationship between people also. For person talking through keyboard and sitting front the computer or use cellphone but not speaking, not face to face. Friends cannot see your eyes, hear your voice. So, using Internet must in a moderation degree. In my opinion, if we have something important to talk, we had better take a call.

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