小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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HI! I have a good friend. It is a boy. His mane is Tom.He is tall and thin.He have short hair. He is friendly. But sometimes he is serious He like eat beef,me too. He like play computer, me too. He like black.He like weekend. This is my good friend.