小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

HI! I have a good friend. It is a boy. His mane is Tom.He is tall and thin.He have short hair. He is friendly. But sometimes he is serious. He like eat beef,me too. He like play computer, me too. He like black.He like weekend. This is my good friend.