小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句式灵活多变，再加强从句的使用会更棒；文中用词稍显贫乏，文中存在一些拼写错误。

my good friend Gina,he is a boy, have a yellow hair and yeloow skin,he like paly basketball very much,somtimes ,ii will get early for a frsh air and he alway on my ground,in my opinion ,he is a good friend, but when i grauted gorm our midhigh school ,i lose my mind to his,this is a shame ,