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2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(55)写作:外出活动

发布时间:2013-07-31 17:55浏览次数:409
要求:

你年级决定本周日进行一次外出活动(have a school trip),请你负责将此消息传达给来自英国的交换生。


要求:           
1. 参考提示语,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现真实地名和姓名;

4. 词数:60-80词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。) 


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用户的作文(系统评分62.0分
评语:

文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Hello, everyone! May I have your attention, please? Have you ever had a hard but exciting trip? Now I've got good news to tell you. This Sunday, we are going to have a school trip like this. We'll walk to Fenghuang Mountain, It's about 10 kilometers away from our school. As we'll be away for the whole day, please remember the following things, Take enough food acid drinks with you and wear comfortable shoes. The most important thing is to keep safe and behave yourselves on the way. I think we'll have a nice trip. That's all. Thank you!

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