小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

HI! I have a good friend. It is a boy. His mane is Tom.He is tall and thin.He have short hair. He is friendly. But sometimes he is serious. His favourite food is beef,me too. His most like playing computer games, me too. He like black.He like weekend. This is my good friend.