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2001年专四作文真题:Travel broadens the mind

发布时间:2013-05-15 10:18浏览次数:5980
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Travel has become part of our life. And more and more of us have come toknow the significance of travel through our own experience.
Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
Travel Broadens the Mind
You are to write in threeparts: 
In the first part, state clearlywhat your view is.
In the second part, support yourview with appropriate reasons.
In the last part, bring what youhave written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
Marks will be awarded forcontent, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow theinstructions may result in a loss of marks.
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可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

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As we know that our feelings effect our lives. keepping a good mood is important to our lives, and proper relaxation is a great way to lead us to find happy. With the development of our society,citizens are busy with studies,works and interpersonal relationship.We try our best to save times,but we have no time to enjoy our lives.And as phone technology improves,we spent more and more time in the mobile phone networks.Almost everyone who has mobile phone last in the virtual world and is away from their families,friends.So, how can they find the happiness?But we always feel tired about everything and we couldn't describe why we are so tired.It tells us that we need a good way to relax yourselves.Reading books,listening musics,talking to your friends,going out and hugging the world. Changing your stressful lifes,just relaxing,you will find happiness is always around you.

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