高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

I have lived in my hometown for sixteen years.It's the most attractive place in my eye before.But as time goes by, great changes took place . There were a lot of green trees around our town.And fishes lived in the water happily.Though the houses were humble,streets were narrow, people worked hard and lived poor. But now,the tall buildings stands on the sides of street,which are seen like forest.