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With the development of information technology, electronic books are increasingly appear in our reading. E-book is convenient, environmental protection and fashion, and a lot of people have gradually accepted the electronic reading.some people even think that e-books can completely replace the paper books. There are several reasons for it.For one thing, all the E-books can be downloaded from the internet directly, most of which are free of charge, while the traditional books in bookstores are much more expensive. For another thing, E-books can be stored easily in our phone and are convenient for us to carry around. Last but not the least, reading E-books has become a fashion in young people who always are interested in electronic products.And Electronic books than paper books more environmental protection, because there is no need to use material. .As far as I am concerned,I’d like to read from E-book,and I think it is better than reading from tradition books. Maybe traditional books are still the leading means of reading in corrent life.But I believe with the further development of information technology, E-books will take the place of traditional books in future.