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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第47篇:好室友是什么样的?

发布时间:2013-08-19 16:51浏览次数:2201
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作文题目:

Colleagues are the people who work with us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good colleague?

Use specific details and examples in your answer.

室友是跟我们一起生活的那个人。依你看,好室友是什么样的?给出例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分62.5分
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作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次较为清晰;作者高级词汇方面要多累积,词汇表达不够丰富。

用户练习作文:

Since we live in society we always need the others to cooperate to finish a work.In that way a good colleague is impartially necessity.In my opinion a good colleague is that guy he always will to give you a hand when you need help.When you have trouble in work you could ask help for.Good colleague is the person you could work together to finish the job efficient and quickly.The one you could always learn somthing form it.The one you respect not only is skill but also he/she's personal characheter.The one you will to spend your time and energy to work with.The one you like and respect.The one you could easily get along with.I think that is one of the most important standars for a good colleague.

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