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若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；层次分明，但过渡词欠缺；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，更能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇。
With the rapid development of the society,travel plays an important role in our daily life. As a saying goes:"only through traveling can we really experience the nature and raise our sight.It's true.To travel is to learn,to learn is to change,to change is to grow.we can appreciate a variety of culture,it's also a good platform to develop a penetrating thought and help us think widely.By doing so,our soul can be strengthened, vision cleared,ambition inspired and success achieved Personally,nothing can delight me more than travel.It's a track record of life that broaden our horizen.What an amazing thingit is!
