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2008年专四作文真题:志愿服务的益处

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:40浏览次数:2452
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题目 The Benefits of Volunteering
说明 December 5th is International Volunteers Day. Since 1985, when the United Nations announced the special day, tens of millions of people around the world have volunteered to help those in needs. China now has 4.5 million registered volunteers who have provided more than 4.5 billion hours of volunteer work. What can you gain from volunteering?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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There is no denying that volunteering makes sense,just as the saying goes:"helping others,cheering yourself."In another word,it's beneficial ro do some volunteering. It's acknowledged that December 5th is Internet Volunteers Day.Tens of millions of person around the world have volunteered to help those in need.Obviously,it's has been a consensus in the whole society.What makes it so popular? On the hand,when you help others out and devote yourself to the society,you must feel fulfilled.On the other hand,by volunteering,not only can you enrich your experience,but also help you achieve self-worth.All in all,whatever you do can make a difference. For my part,I can't agree with more that volunteering makes benefits.So why not?

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