作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章层次较为清晰。
We live in the world year in, year out. Some of us don't know what he wants or what he wants to be, even doesn't know what he lives for. It's a sad situation. As the saying goes some people alive, he is dead, some people died, he is still alive. Then how can we have a meaningful life? Lei Feng said that person's life is limited, but service is infinite, I want to put the limited life into the unlimited service.Yeah! We can't change the length of your life, but we can change the height of his life. Every man has to die and some of them want to extend the length of his life, he became selfish and indifferent. He was fear to face difficulty and danger, he wants to hurt others then make himself happy. This person died will be forgotten soon. He had lived in this world, but can leave nothing to proof. The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it. One person although he only lived for decades and he will always be memorable. The hero like Lei Feng, Liu Hulan, Li Dazhao...... They were memorable by people. So if one day you must die why don't you do something to light your life!