小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色。

my best friend is a beautiful girl named mary. she is tall and have a long back hair.she is friendly to others .i like to play sports with her. i am happy to spend time with her.she is kind and creative.she like music too.she has learned to play the piano since she was only 5 years old.