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I think people should find out the moving things in their daily life. I still remember that what I saw when I was a child. At that time,I just a primary school student.I saw a woman who lost her money.She was so sad that she didn't know how to do.Someone realized what happened to her and tries his best to help this woman.Finally,they find out her money on the road. Although this was a small thing,I was deeply moved. I think we should help each other. If we do that,we will have a better society.
