2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(24)写作:开学第一天

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Monday, Sept. 3 Fine Today was the first day of my new life. I looked at my new books and checked everything for the new school year. I was excited as well as worried.I was excited because of I went into the interesting school.I was very hard to study for this school.I was very worried because of most of classmates and teachers are strange,and I didn't know how to get along well with them.But after I got the school,I found teachers and classmates are very friendly.At the moment,I wasn't nervous any more,I feld very relaxed.when I left school,I believe I wasn't worried any longer,and I would be happy in the strange school.