2009全国中考英语试题汇编试题(55)写作:雾霾天气（haze weather)

希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；没有能够有效地使用连接词和过渡词。

Haze weather is harmful to our health and can make us sick.Also cars can't see well in the city which has haze weather so accidents will happen. It's our duty to protect the world.I think we should take buses to school instead of by car.We can make a poster call on more person to protect the world.What's more,we must believe ourselves that we can do it.