你选择的国家及其理由
周末外出参观学习
回国后的打算
作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
I'm Li Hua from Huaxin Middle School. I'm Li Hua from Huaxin Middle School. I am an active boy of 18 years old this year. I would like to choose the United States of America as my destination, because I have always been dreaming to go there to practice my American English. If possible, I'd like to stay at such homes that have students of my age so that I can communicate with them easily. During my stay there I will attend school during the weekday learning and go out to travel at weekend. When I'm back, I'm sure to share what I have got during my stay in America and work even harder to improve myself as well as helping all my friends.