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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33539
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;文章层次较为清晰。

用户练习作文:

Save money I do not think it may not make us smart consumers.On the contrary, i am in favor of being careful with our money in the daily life ,because it can help us form a good habit of saving money.Besides, it can make us spend the money properly. Let me take myself as an example. As for myself, i am always careful with my money ,because i know that it is tough for my parents to earn the money. I also collect the coupons in case i want to eat out .When the clothes were in sale, i would buy lots of clothes with my friends ,for it can be cheaper.When being available, i surf the internet to find whether there are some group-buy deals and i will save them .For this, i can save a lot of money and spend it carefully or properly. At last, we can conclude that saving money is very important for us , especially the students . As possible, we can find some wholesale or some activities to make us spend the money properly.

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