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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;文章层次较为清晰。
Save money I do not think it may not make us smart consumers.On the contrary, i am in favor of being careful with our money in the daily life ,because it can help us form a good habit of saving money.Besides, it can make us spend the money properly. Let me take myself as an example. As for myself, i am always careful with my money ,because i know that it is tough for my parents to earn the money. I also collect the coupons in case i want to eat out .When the clothes were in sale, i would buy lots of clothes with my friends ,for it can be cheaper.When being available, i surf the internet to find whether there are some group-buy deals and i will save them .For this, i can save a lot of money and spend it carefully or properly. At last, we can conclude that saving money is very important for us , especially the students . As possible, we can find some wholesale or some activities to make us spend the money properly.