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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；作者词汇表达较灵活，可是有些单词拼错了。
The digram showed two different action when people face up the difficulty. A bottle milk was turned over,the pessimistic people was crying for it,meanwhile,another thought it was so lucky to have some leftover.One people is opmistic she think things wasn't so terriable and immediately to save things ,but Another people is pessimstic,he just stay there not doing anything.I'm a moderate people but an ordainary people,I also would be grieve and wanted to complain about everything when I got in trouble.But it's not enough,we should precieve the good things from the bad situation no matter how terriable it was.On my own part,I think we should learn the later spirit,hold an optimstic attitude towards life,remember whatever happens,whereever it happens ,it's truly up to you.And we can acquire the achivement easily if we hold the choose to deal with things more opmistic.
