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We have learned that most of the students are short of money,and their paying are from thier parents,so they have to save money in order to study well in college.Firstly,i want to say that students don't need to buy so many thing except for they must need to use in study.Secondy, i think we student should foucus on our study ,not need to buy too much clothes.For example,when we see a beautiful dress or shorts we may really loved,but if you buy them,after that you may feel regret for that,as you have to use this money to buy some important material.Many of us is unreasonable on spending,so i have a advice for the people that it is always a good way to make a plan for your spending.At the begaining of the month,your should make a plan on the paper about how to spend your money.At the end of the month ,you will find that all you should buy is just fine,you will never over spent your money on the unuseful things. As a student ,in my opinion,it is very important to learn to save money.No only for your parents ,but for yourself.After four years' study,you will find that you have saved a lot of money,using it can do something you want in future.After your gruduation,you will use the money you saved to find job,and don't need to ask you parents.
