小学三年级英语作文:My father's day

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My father is a busy man and very hard working on his work.He is always get off from work very late.My mother and I always waiting for him having dinner.In the morning,He gets up early and eats breakfast.He often ride a bycicle to go to work from monday to friday.my father is worker in a factory.I 've gone there before.It is a big facotry and have 2000 worker working there.and He likes his job very much,and i also live to be a work like my father,so now i have to study hard in order to achieve that goal.