2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

With the rapid development of the technologies, computer become the essential things for our human beings life. We use it to work, to play, to live, and so on. In one word, computer bring many things for human life, including advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, computer brings many advantages for human life. Firstly, computer makes our life more convenient. We can communicate with our friends or families no matter how long our distance is. Secondly, computer makes our life more easy. we can sometimes make our works easy if use computers. Last but not least, computer makes our life more funny. We can watch movies or TV or play games use computers during our spare time. On the other hand, computer brings some disadvantages for human life. For one thing, it may makes our life more negative.Because we are easy addicted to play games using computer. For another, computer makes us more idleness so that we may loss many opportunities to study skills. Since we like to depend on computers to search some things for our work or study. On the conclusion, we can try our best to help us using the best side of computer. Only in this way, we can use the computer and have a good life.