文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Reading, seems to be a grind, or which has some head cantilever, cone Cigu?? but why and some people can not eat, do not sleep to read it? According to my opinion, reading mainly Sanle. First, arbitrary. Reading, the master is you, you go to school, not the book tube you, forcing you to read. The book is to have sb. at one's disposal. You want to read, then you can take a reading, poetry, prose, fiction...... Follow you. You can ask Kong Zi for life art, you can also relax your mood by small said, you can experience feelings in the prose. Second, the growth of knowledge. When you finish reading the book in the friends and relatives the bombast, talking, not people have a feeling of "shibetsu three days when you sit up and take notice of it? Third, to help you learn. When you read the book, when the exam just to test the book, Is it right? Not say there is a joy in my heart? Reading is a kind of enjoyment, is a way to experience the happiness. Come on, friend, read a book, read a book, and experience the pleasure of reading.!