拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
Reading, seems to be a grind, or which has some head cantilever, cone Cigu?? but why and some people can not eat, do not sleep to read it? According to my opinion, reading mainly Sanle. First, arbitrary. Reading, the master is you, you go to school, not the book tube you, forcing you to read. The book is to have sb. at one's disposal. You want to read, then you can take a reading, poetry, prose, fiction...... Follow you. You can ask Kong Zi for life art, you can also relax your mood by small said, you can experience feelings in the