拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用。
To further your study or to work From my perspective, I would like to choose further study. And there are three reasons totally. In the first place, we have to admit that the more knowledge, the better, especially for medical students. It can help us broaden our view and improve the skills, so that we can reach a higher platform and get more opportunities. In the second place, study is a continuous flow, it would be difficult to further your study if you have walked into the job market, since a adult life not only include studying, but also a complicated personal life such as interpersonal relationships and so on. Last but not least, I love the pure life in campus, which is goal-oriented and full of hope and misery. To sum up, I would like to go further study.
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