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Nowadays,tourism is very popular all around the world,while it also brings harm to the environment.However,in my opinion,the advantage of tourism is more than disadvantage of tourism. First,developing tourism can increase the position,more and more people can make a living for it.Second,parents can travel with their children so that they can communicate more with their children,also the children can learn more from the travel.Third,tourism will help develop other industries such as transportation,shopping and so on.All these can improve the quality of people's life.Of course,every thing has two sides,tourism can bring harm to environment but we can't deny its advantage.We can't stop developing it for its downside.As for environment,I think we should improve people's awareness of protecting environment,only by this way can the tourism will boom All in all,on the one hand,we should develop tourism so that it helps people live better and enjoy life,learn more about culture around the world.On the other hand,we should let people form the idea that they should protect the environment.Then the tourism will do good to economy and also improve the standard of our surrounding.
