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2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:36浏览次数:1949
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese. 

1.有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重 

2.浪费的危害

3.杜绝浪费, 从我做起 

用户的作文(系统评分72.0分
评语:

从句使用量稍显不足;上下文衔接稍显不流畅;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,高级词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

With the remarkable improvement of people's living standard,the phenomenon that waste things happened more frequently in our daily life. These days,this penomenon has aroused wide public concern,many people have a heated discussion on this problem.As far as I am concerned,it is a bad behavior to waste things.For instance,we can see the wasted paper and the food that is left easily.In fact,we can make full use of these things.And on the other hand,the penomenon that waste things don't mirror the social advance.To some extent,it do harm to the healthy development of our people.Taken many factors into consideration,we must make joint effort to reduce this phnomenon.From another perspective,it is our unshakable duty.

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