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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4562
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
评语:

句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

With the development of science and technology, more and more students use electronic dictionary. First, it can be updated synchronously, thus saving a lot of time. Electronic dictionary is the crystallization of high-tech products, connected with the Internet, ready to download the latest information from the Internet. At the same time, the reader can also accord to their favorite search to want things. Second, the electronic dictionary is small and easy to carry.Today, the pursuit of simple and practical things, electronic dictionary will be advantageous to study and study lovers. Electronic dictionary appearance as mobile phone size, easy to carry. Third, English learning content, search convenient, intuitive, time saving. Most of the domestic students suffer from learning English is actually a good helper not found. English vocabulary so big, it's difficult to do remember every word, with the electronic dictionary we can find the words at any time when we can't remember. And it's not too long to save time and time.. Of course, everything has two sides. First, the need for power supply, need regularly change the battery or charge. We all look at the electronic product battery,it is a headache problem. It needs to often charge over the battery, so it seems much trouble. Second, the relatively common dictionary, the price is expensive. For this high-tech thing, not every family can bear. High prices will deter many people. As far as I am concerned, electronic dictionaries have good aspects, too.. According to different people to make different choices. For yourself is the best!

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