语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用偏少;单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量。
we are used to believing a matter when we first heard it or first see it.however,it is opposite most of the time.thus it is not wise to believe what you see.it is the fact that matters.for example,what we see or hear was just a piece of the whole thing,we can not judge it depend on it.
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