一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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A Busy Day This is a busy day. Today,I did a lot of things.After finishing my homework, I helped my mother with the housework.Mother praised me:" you are very sensible.I am proud of you." I also did execise and played some sports.after supper,I Watched TV and played pingpong. What a good day!