正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达不够丰富,同时请仔细检查词汇的拼写;层次欠清晰,衔接成分很少。
A Busy Day This is a busy day. Today,I did a lot of things.After finishing my homework, I helped my mother with the housework.Mother praised me:" you are very sensible.I am proud of you." I also did execise and played some sports.after supper,I Watched TV and played pingpong. What a good day!