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【题目要求】
In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.【题目分析】
注意审题。是teenager而不是college students。Teenagers have jobs，这显然是一个BAD idea。Teenager，意指十几岁的孩子——16岁或者18岁以下(18岁以上就是adult了，16、7的孩子往往被称之为 young adults。参见：[61])。雇用童工(Employing children labor)目前在很多国家是非法(illegal)的。也违反国际儿童保护条约(International Children Act )。允许雇用童工，或存在童工现象，都是一个国家落后愚昧的表现。不要说teenager打工可以锻炼自我，teenager需要的是接受教育，健康成长；不要说teenager打工可以认识社会，teenager还不具备足够的心理承受能力(psychological endurance)，过早步入社会 (early exposure to the real world)，只能导致世界观、价值观(out look of world, value, etc.)的扭曲(deteriorated; distorted)。采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩。
Nowadays,many teenagers have jobs in order to relive the burden of family or make some allowance.nevertheless as far as I am concerned,it is not resonable for teenagers to work.Let me tell you why I think so. First,teenager is very young and they are still growing.On the one hand, doing a job may deprive them of happiness and they can't grow up happily.On the other hand,studying and learning are the pigeon for teenagers they shouldn't do a job.Second,employing children labor is illegal ,and it also breaks the laws of International Children Act so it is not reasonable for teenagers to have a job.Third,as teenagers,they are very young and they are not mature.At that age,their out look of world and value don't form.At this time, Early exposure to the real world may cause them to find disadvantages of society while later they will have a negative attitude to life.It is very horrible. Above all,I do not agree that teenagers have jobs,they should be happy every day and receive a good education.Only this way,can they live happily.When they grow up,they can do good to society,in my opinion it is more useful than working when they as teenagers
