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on my personal level ,saving money is very nessecary,because i think earn money is not easy. Most people take a great importance to their money,and money can buy many thinks.clothes,foods and so on. So if we pay more attention to our money when we buy something or spend it to do other things. Forming a good hobit and realize to money is a good way.