高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。

my hometown I lived in a very old town which surrounded many green trees. there is many fish in the river. the old house is very poor and the street is very narrow. people always work hard in the field in the day and they make a poor live. now, many high house and company are in the street. all kinds of the cars run in the street. but as the industry go on, the wood reduced and the fish is less and less. reduce pollution is the most important thing now.