单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Today,we know a information.We only have four days,we will be graduation test.I very amaze.I think we don't review lessons good.Why?How will?I don't know.Review,and review......All day we have math class and language class,four day isn't enough.We will be graduation test,we will graduation too.We will go away,leave the school.Goodby,my dear classmate,my dear school.I must more earnestly than ago,go over the lessons.How the future?