增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;作者词汇量偏小,另外文章有些单词拼写错误;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Today,we know an information.We only have four days,and we will be graduation test.I very amaze.I think we don't review good lessons.Why?How will?I don't know.I mave to review,and review......All day we have math class and language class,four day isn't enough.We will be graduation test,we will graduation too.We will go away,leave the school.Goodby,my dear classmate,my dear school.I must more earnestly than ago,go over the lessons.How the future?