正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。
Today,we know an information.We only have four days,and we will be graduation test.I very amaze.I think we don't review good lessons.Why?How will?I don't know.I have to review,and review......All day we have math class and language class,four days isn't enough.We will be graduation test,and we will graduation too.We will go away,and we will leave this school.Goodby,my dear classmate,my dear school.I must more earnestly than before,go over the lessons.How the future?