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Today,we know an information.We only have four days,and we will be graduation test.I very amaze.I think we don't review good lessons.Why?How will?I don't know.I have to review,and review......All day we have math class and language class,four days isn't enough.We will be graduation test,and we will graduation too.We will go away,and we will leave this school.Goodby,my dear classmate,my dear school.I must more earnestly than before,go over the lessons.what about the future?