雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；作者高级词汇的积累，及词汇拼写都要再接再厉；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩。

people 's life have been improved hugely in china since renovation.In addtion RMB rate rise.More and more people would like to choose travel at abroad .One benifit , people can buy high quality product with cheap price, people can enjoy a beuatiful landscaple and feel other country culture and story instead of watching TV at home. another benifit, people spent money in other country, support that country economic. However, Traveling aboard is mian pure in china now , especial it is very popular in new generation.but there is still a lot of risk orbad aspect. one is that people donot respect local people culture and habit. people keep their bad habit in other country ,like spitting out in the street , speak loudly in public place, throw away bargeage in any coner.also we can bring the new creature into our envorinment,which can be damage the original biological cycle, and new viures. People can meet the natural dizaster or traffic accident .someone can be arrested by the enemy or terriost, so many political factor in a stanger country. when you are ready to go , people should do a lot research and make a plan.