单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;文中从句过少;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
Betty is one of my good friends. She is a girl with black hair, and big eyes. She is not very tall, but she is beautiful. She is friendly with everyone that make her very popular. She always study hard, thus make her get a good performance. I love her so much.