文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;文章层次较为清晰;简单句有点多,从句数量使用不足。
Good friend I have a good friend.She is a very beautiful girl.we often call her Jessie for short.She has black hair and big eyes.she likes singing and dancing,she is so smart that can get A each subjects. she is very kind. when we have some trouble in learning she always help us this our lessons. we all like her!