文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;文中从句过少;文章层次较为清晰。
Good friend I have a good friend.She is a very beautiful girl.we often call her Jessie for short.She has black hair and big eyes.she likes singing and dancing,She is so smart that can get A each subjects. she is very kind. When we have some trouble in learning she always help us With our lessons. We all like her!