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save money is a virtual In my view, I think that save money is a virtual for students, on matter how wealth you are.And saving money can make us smart consumers . There are two reasons for my reason.Firstly,at school,most students 'money depond on their parents,because they have no ability to earn the money ,especally for Chinese students.In that case,we should save our money.And when we want to buy something,we should think more carefully,am i really need it?If the answer is not,then you shouldn't buy it.As a smart consumers ,we must realize that we should buy something we really need and avoiding wasting.Producting some deals really need much cost.For instance,producting a cloth will cause much pollution to our envirment,and a smart consumer should take it considered.So we have no reason to don't save things.May be it's not only the money .Scondly,if we could get all kinds of coupons,why don't we do it.I think that group-buy deals are not worse than simple-buy deals.I think a smart consumer is how to buy the good things by less money.In that case,we also consider to saving money. In short,I think,in order to be a smart consumer,the first thing is how can i save money as soon as possible.
