语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用偏少;文中词汇表达方面较丰富灵活,但在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。
time is flying, and the four year's college life will come to end.so what i have learned from my years at university.to be frank,not learning too much. first,i didn't pay attention to my major course at university.instead,i've spent most of time playing sport, and hanging out.although i'v already passed my courses i've learnt at college,i find it's still hard to apply it,beacuse all i did was just to deal with the exams and really ignored the substandial things. second, i didn't really join some activities out of the college,which might increase social experiences,except participating school's sport team.actually,i think that i spent time in vain. third,i'm still wondered what's my favorite for my future career.my major at university was computer technology which not interest me at all.it was a real fault that i choosed this major at the beginning of college. it's a bit bad feeling as i think of what i have learned at university.anyway,i know this now,i will work had to make up the wasted time at university.