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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦19:我的梦想

发布时间:2014-07-03 17:58浏览次数:1188
要求:
习近平总书记在十二届全国人大一次会议闭幕会上描绘了“中国梦”的蓝图,上周一班会课我们班就“我的梦想”进行了一次热烈的讨论,学生们发表了各自的看法。
Tom
健康的饮食, 多运动,有强健的体魄来…
Kate
环境好,污染少,生活在一个鸟语花香的世界,…
Mary
有一天能乘飞机去香港旅游,因为香港是购物天堂,…
Millie
有足够的时间玩自己最喜欢的教育游戏,在玩的同时学习英语和地理…
你自己

要求:1. 要点齐全,可适当增加细节使句子通顺、连贯。
2. 最后一点要展开合理的想象,不少于2点。

3. 词数80左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。


My dream
Everyone may have his own dream. Someone may want to be rich, someone may want to be beautiful, and someone may want to have power. Last Monday, we had a warm discussion about this topic at the class meeting. Here are different opinions. ________________________________________________________
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When thinking of these things, we realize that we are full of life and hope.
用户的作文(系统评分65.0分
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文章高级词汇使用贫乏,单词拼写做的不错;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次较为清晰。

用户练习作文:

ported him to my bed to sleep with me. However, I could hardly get to sleep, for I was feeling that a pure heart was bleeding . From then on, he wasn’t fond of talking with others any more. Although, he talked with me sometimes. He kept himself behind the window more often than before. Sometimes, waking up in the morning, I saw he was bending over the window. I could hardly find a way to help him. Suddenly came a day when he took my hand and whispered to me that he would set off for a very beautiful and rich city in the south the next day, leaving behind the school, his hometown and his best friend, me , and that he would go a long way in the future. He talked on and on, meanwhile, he smiled. “I will earn a lot of money , then I want to buy a car and a very beautiful villa, in which I will live a calm life.” Oh, dear! I could hardly believe my own ears. What he said means that he would leave the next day. Just the next day! I asked with puzzle on my face: “Chen , have you decided?” He nodded calmly. Then he pulled my hand and ran outside, “Let’s enjoy ourselves until sunset.” He shouted. So we did. We ran in the field, so that all our clothes were covered with dust. We rambled on the river where grew a lot of reeds. I picked up a reed catkin and blew. As a result , his whole head was covered with white. We played until dark , indeed, we chased after the setting sun with laugh all the way. Forgetting the time and the way. We enjoyed ourselves for long… Now , without my friend, Chen, I can only stand in the wind, in such a beautiful evenfall and look back on the days before. I know , he is walking on the road of a southern city with his future dream . And I am still studying in the northern school, dreaming of going to university. We are remarkable. There is still a long way for my friend, Chen and me. Never forget the boy who liked dreaming and was fond of sitting behind the window, looking into the darkness outside. May there be enough clouds in his life to make a beautiful sunset.

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